英语作文批改

考研英语作文批改软件给的分数不可靠。批改作文的技术之前就有应用，不过是在英语作文上。它能给一些教育资源匮乏的地区减轻负担，提高教学效率。不过这样的技术也受到了一些质疑，机器遵循的规则可能无法覆盖语言的多样性。从结果来看，可能会给一些优秀的作文判出平庸的分数，公平性存疑。

肯定是比人工好用的，比较自己人工修改还是轻松一点，我有时候也用作业帮来批改，而且里面的解析也是蛮准的。推荐

The trip was happy ... 中的happy 改为 interesting，因为trip不好用happy 修饰。

1.caused改成attracted，2.attentions去掉s, 3.students后加"4.disagreed去掉ed5.argued去掉ed6. ,Not改成，not. 7. better改成good，8.there改成their

我高考的时候也想把英语作文搞搞~真的是很头痛呢^^ 进了大学读了英语系才发现，如果我高中的时候就去看多大学的东西，就不会在高中那些少的可怜的英语作文材料里纠结了~而且高考英语都是大学老师在批~他们看到你用这种大学英语的东西会很加分哒^^~所以给你提供我觉得相当有用的东西哦 英语四六级写作25个加分句型 一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) ~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) 例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。 Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。 二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V 例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education. 没有比接受教育更重要的事。 三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.（再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。） 例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。 四、There is no denying that + S + V ...（不可否认的...） 例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。 五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ （全世界都知道...） 例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。 六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ （毫无疑问的...） 例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。 七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子 （...的优点是...） 例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won"t create (produce) any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。 八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 （...的原因是...） 例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 （如此...以致于...） 例句：So precious is time that we can"t afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。 十、Adj + as + Subject（主词）+ be, S + V~~~ （虽然...） 例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不} 虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。 十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~the + ~er + S + V ~~~ The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~the + more + Adj + S + V~~~（愈...愈...） 例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make. 你愈努力，你愈进步。 The more books we read, the more learned we become. 我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。 十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ （借着...，..能够..） 例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。 十三、~~~ enable + Object（受词）+ to + V （..使..能够..） 例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。 十四、On no account can we + V ~~~ （我们绝对不能...） 例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 十五、It is time + S + 过去式 （该是...的时候了） 例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems. 该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。 十六、Those who ~~~ （...的人...） 例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished. 违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。 十七、There is no one but ~~~ （没有人不...） 例句：There is no one but longs to go to college. 没有人不渴望上大学。 十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V （不得不...） 例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports. 既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。 十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 （可想而知的） It is obvious that + 句子 （明显的） It is apparent that + 句子 （显然的） 例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life. 可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。 二十、That is the reason why ~~~ （那就是...的原因） 例句：Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don"t like it. 夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。 二十一、For the past + 时间，S + 现在完成式...（过去...年来，...一直...） 例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination. 过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。 二十二、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。 例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard. 自从他上高中，他一直很用功。 二十三、It pays to + V ~~~ （...是值得的。） 例句：It pays to help others. 帮助别人是值得的。 二十四、be based on （以...为基础） 例句：The progress of thee society is based on harmony. 社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。 二十五、Spare no effort to + V （不遗余力的） 例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. 我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。 还有下面这些是我正在读的一些原版书里的好句子 You can never have too much sky. You can fall asleep and wake up drunk on sky, and sky can keep you safe when you are sad. Here there is too much sadness and not enough sky. Butterflies too are few and so are flowers and most things that are beautiful. Still, we take what we can get and make the best of 。你永远不能拥有太多的天空。你可以在天空下睡去，醒来又沉醉。在你忧伤的时候，天空会给你安慰。可是忧伤太多，天空不够，蝴蝶不够，花儿也不够。大多美好的东西都不够。于是，我们去我们所能，好好的享用。——《芒果街上的小屋》 IT is a truth universally acknowledged, that （a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.）这是一条举世皆知的真理，那就是...（套进去^^）——《傲慢与偏见》 There is no royal road to (science.) ......路上无坦途。——马克思。 有的时候一个很好的单词作用也是非常强大的哦~可以替换以下哈~这些都是传说中的big words~ 1. important =crucial (extremely important),significant(amount or effect large enough to be important) 2.common=universal, ubiquitous(if something is ubiquitous, it seems to be everywhere) 3.abundant=ample(enough and usually extra), plentiful(enough for people"s needs and wants)1 4.stick=adhere, cling(hold on something tightly)1 5.neglect=ignore.(difference: neglect means someone has not paid enough attention to something; ignore means no attention.) 6.near=adjacent(twothings next to each other), adjoin(the same as adjacent)" 7.pursue=woo(man woos woman, old-fashioned), seek(if you seek sth, you try to obtain it. FORMAL) 8.accurate=precise(precise is exact and accurate in all details), exact(correct in every detail) 9.vague=obscure(unknown or known by only a few people) 10.top=peak, summit 11.competitor=rival, opponent(especially in sports and politics)1 12.blame=condemn(if you condemn something, you say it is very bad and unacceptable) 13.opinon=perspective, standpoint(means looking at an event or situation in a particular way) 14.fame=prestige(describe those who are admired), reputation 15.build=erect(you can erect something as buildings, FORMAL), establish 16.insult=humiliate(do something or say something which makes people feel ashamed or stupid) 17.complain=grumble (complain something in a bad-tempered way) 18.primary=radical (very important and great in degree), fundamental 19.relieve=alleviate (alleviate means you make pain or sufferings less intense or severe) 20.force=coerces into(coerce means you make someone do something s/he does not want to),compel 21.enlarge=magnify(magnify means make something larger than it really is) 22.complex=intricate(if something is intricate, it often has many small parts and details) 23. Lonely=solitary (if someone is solitary, there is no one near him/her 24.small=minuscule(very small), minute, V. A. B8 Q6 w, p$ S 25.praise=extol(stronger than praise), compliment(polite and political) 26.hard-working=assiduous(someone who is assiduous works hard or does things very thoroughly 27.difficult=arduous (if something is arduous, it is difficult and tiring, and involves a lot of efforts) 28.poor(soil)=barren, infertile(used to describe the soil is so poor that plants cannot be planted on it) 29.fragile=brittle, vulnerable(someone who is vulnerable is easily hurt emotionally or physically)+ 30.show=demonstrate (to demonstrate a fact means tp make it clear to people.) 31.big=massive(large in size, quantity, or extent), colossal(use this word, you emphasize something"s large), tremendous(INFORMAL)+ 32.avoid=shun(if someone shuns something, s/he deliberately avoid that something or keep away from it.)% [- ?0 B/ X: V 33.fair=impartial(someone who is impartial is able to give a fair opinion or decision on something.)0 U! V0 e/ a" h0 L8 ~ 34.attack=assault (physically attack someone), assail (attack violently 35.dislike=abhor(abhor means you hate something to a extreme extent for moral reasons), loathe(dislike very much)! 36.ruin=devastate (it means damage something very badly, or utterly destroy it.) 39.always=invariably(the same as always, but better than always)4 40.forever=perpetual(a perpetual state never changes), immutable(something immutable will never change or be changed) 41.surprise=startle(it means surprise you slightly), astound(surprise you to a large degree),astonish(the same as astound) 42.enthusiasm=zeal (a great enthusiasm), fervency (sincere and enthusiasm)# 43.quiet=tranquil(calm and peaceful), serene(calm and quiet)! 44.expensive=exorbitant(it means too expensive that it should be) 45.luxurious=lavish(impressive and very expensive), sumptuous(grand and very expensive 46.boring=tedious(if you describe something tedious, you mean it is boring and frustrating) 47.respect=esteem(if you esteem someone, you respect and admire him/her. FORMAL) 48.worry=fret(if you fret about something, you worry about it) 49.cold=chilly(unpleasantly cold), icy(extremely cold) 50.hot=boiling(very hot) 51.dangerous=perilous(very dangerous, hazardous(dangerous, especially to people"s safety and health)/ { 52.nowadays=currently 53.only=unique(the only one of its kind), distinctive; 54.stop=cease(if something ceases, it stops happening or existing) 55.part=component(the components of something are the parts that it is made of)( h 56.result=consequence(the results or effects of something) 57.obvious=apparent, manifest 58.basedon=derived fromcan see or notice them very easily) 60.quite=fairly 61.pathetic=lamentable(very uncomfortable and disappointing) 62.field=domain(a particular field of thought, activities or interest) 63.appear=emerge(come into existence) 64.whole=entire(the whole of something)8 65.wet=moist(slightly wet), damp(slightly wet), humid(very damp and hot)! 66.wrong=erroneous(incorrect or partly correct) 67.difficult=formidable 68.change=convert(change into another form) 69.typical=quintessential(this word means represent a typical example of something) 70.careful=cautious(very careful in order to avoid danger), prudent(careful and sensible) 71.ability=capacity, capability(the same as ability) 72.strange=eccentric(if some one is eccentric, s/he behaves in a strange way, or his/her opinion is different from most people) 73.rich=affluent(if you are affluent, you have a lot of money) 74.use= utilize (the same as use) 75.dubious=skeptical(if you are skeptical about something, you have doubts on it.) 76.satisfy=gratify (if you are gratified by something, it gives you pleasure and satisfaction) 77.short=fleeting, ephemeral(if something is ephemeral, it lasts a short time) 78.scholarship=fellowship 79.angry=enraged(extremely angry) 80.smelly=malodorous(used to describe an unpleasant smell) 81.ugly=hideous(if something is hideous, it is very ugly or unattractive)# 82.attractive=appealing(pleasing and attractive), absorbing(something absorbing can attract you a great deal) 83.diverse=miscellaneous(a miscellaneous groups consists of many different kinds of things) 84.disorder=disarray, chaos 85.crazily=frantically(used to describe someone who behaves in a wild and uncontrolled way) 86.rapid=meteoric(ATTENTION: meteoric is only used to describe someone achieves success quickly) 87.ordinary=mundane(very ordinary and not at interesting or unusual) 88.despite=notwithstanding(FORMAL) 89.best=optimal(used to describe the best level something can achieve)/ 90.sharp=acute(severe and intense) 91.unbelievable=inconceivable(ifyou deem something inconceivable, you think it very unlike to happen ^ 92.puzzle=perplex(something perplex someone means it confuses and worries him/her because he/she does not understand it) 93.method=avenue(away of getting something done) 94.famous=distinguished(used to describe people who are successful in their career) 95.ancient=archaic(extremely old and extremely old-fashioned) 96.decorate=embellish(embellish means make something look more attractive via decorating it with something else)/ 97.possible=feasible(if something is feasible, it can be done, made or achieved) 98.so=consequently, accordingly 99.rare=infrequent (doesn"t happen often 100.greedy=rapacious(greedy and selfish) 以下是其他的搜集 英语写作常用句型（一）段首句 1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为…… There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____. 2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天， 它在许多场合仍然适用。 There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……； 其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。 Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is tha

如今,父母总是渴望他们的孩子们成为成功者,他们把他们参加艺术看报纸。然而,过多的课程,对孩子们难以忍受。所以,有一个问题. 家长应不应该把他们的孩子们艺术课程吗?有些人真的都支持这样一个观点,即父母应送孩子们teir艺术课程。他们认为,加入课程意味着几个孩子能获得更多的知识和有shkill。更重要的是,如果孩子学习好,他们也会有更多的全球普及率有一个成功。那么,为什么没有打发他们艺术的班级吗?但是,硬币都有faces.这里有几个人反对这些父母。在他们的心里,孩子只不过是孩子,他们的天然在玩。相见时难别让孩子们去参加太多的课。同时,如果他们没有,我想学习这样,他们不能好好学习。那么,为什么打发他们去,他们这么多的班级吗?简而言之,我认为如果孩子们喜欢画画,然后把他或她学习画画。如果孩子们喜欢唱歌,然后把他或她学习唱歌。有趣的是最好的老师。这是不必要的,参加如此多的艺术课程。如果他们不想参加课程,然后让他们玩对方。幸福才是最重要的问题。

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修改后：Having a baby can change your life which can be positive or negative. It has a positive effect on you as it enables you to become more responsible, brings you more happiness and enhances the relationship between husband and wife. When the baby speaks for the first time and calls you“father” or “mother”, you will be joyful and excited. When the baby walks for the first time, you feel extremely happy. As the child grows and maturers day by day , you can feel more and more happiness and excitement. The baby is an extension of the parents"life and the prove of their love. However, it can have negative effects such as sleep deprivation, change of purpose in live that you no longer live solely for yourself and all the hard works of looking after a baby. The most siginificant effect is sleep deprivation due to baby"s irregular sleeping pattern. We often hear babies cry at night. The baby might be feeling hungry, parents need to get up to feed him/her. Consequently, parents might have to wake several times at night care for their children. Also, when you have a baby, your life changes and you no longer live for yourself. You can no longer go see a film, go shopping or go to a party whenever you want to, because you have a baby to care for. Futhermore, I think that when you have a baby, you need to work hard to earn more money as it is a huge cost to care for a baby, such as education cost, toys, clothing,etc. Your life will be changed when you have a baby, it has some benefits, but also carries potential risks. The benefits are giving you satisfaction and enhance parents" relationships. However, there are some risks, such as sleep deprivation, the fact that you no longer live for yourself and the need to work harder.希望对你有帮助~天上~注：作文中重复的地方都删去了。如果不能引出什么新的内容来，用第一，第二，第三格式说着一样的话，只会让文章看起来累赘。

Within the development of internet technology, online shopping becomes more popular . among young people, they especially love this new shopping style. in some way, Online shopping has created much more convenient life,we living amidst today. there is no need to go to the store. all we need to do is click, choosing the one we want.while taking the advantage of convenient, we may think about the risk. u2160: we can"t identify the quality. the reason is obviously : what we see is just picture.u2161:when we buy something on internet, we may get one which is not same one as picture we choosed. u2162: when we pay on internet , we are taking the risk of exploring our passward. if someone knew our passward of bank card, we would loss bunch of money. here is some tips about shopping online: always stay on the alert when shopping online. also, choosing the sellers with good credit and keeping laptop safe will be helpful.

教师在布置了作业之后，还需要批改，那么英语作文怎么样批改评语呢？下面是我收集整理的英语作文批改评语，欢迎阅读参考~ 字迹 A、本子清秀、整洁，犹如海滨小城的街道一样，找不到一点脏……端端正正的字迹，让人看了真舒服……你的字像印的一样漂亮……很惭愧，我字没有你写的好看…… B、随随便便，字哪能不像猫掏的似的……字不在格子中间，当然看起来不顺眼……你的字东倒西歪，是不是今天风太大，才刮成这样的……我不相信你的字写不好，永远就这么潦草……认真耐心地写，你会写的比我还要棒…… 内容 A、这般丰富的内容，简直和作家写出来的差不多呀……你的习作有血有肉，读起来真是一大享受……你的作文内容具体，我读的十分过瘾……你平时肯定爱看作文书，才写出这么多字…… B、干巴巴的内容如同白开水，一点味道也没有，多加些优美的词句就好喝了……不如刘维维字数多（或者举其他差生名字），你不觉得有点难为情吗……你的作文像90岁老太太的嘴，干瘪空洞，讲话直漏风…… 语句 A、这篇文章流畅生动的语句，好似庐山瀑布，飞流直下，通顺极了……比喻得十分贴切，说明你一向观察细心……你怎么想出这么巧妙的拟人句的……反问句运用在这里多么合适……这个感叹句表达了你当时真实的感情……古诗引用恰到好处，我以后也要把学过的诗用到作文中去……歇后语用的妙啊妙啊，把我肚子都笑疼了…… B、作文疙疙瘩瘩，读起来很难受，如同走在乡下凹凸不平的小路上，不小心就容易跌一跤……句子像被谁切断了，不完整……写好后仔细读一读，就会发现不通的地方……不要怕麻烦，好文章都是改出来的……不能老指望别人替你改，要学会自己修改每句话…… 层次 A、小节分的清清楚楚……小节划分合适……一个小节讲一层意思，段落分明…… B、这篇文章层次混乱，一节包含那么多内容，读着有喘不过气来的"感觉……小节分的太少，你舍不得多分吗……中间一节还能再分几个小节……一、二小节不该分，要合并……这一节与上面小节内容联系不上…… 详略 A、这篇文章重点突出……重点部分写的详细，不错……事情的经过一五一十都叙述清楚了……按游览的顺序记叙了各个风景点，重点描写了…… B、第X节写的过于罗嗦……看不出这篇作文重点是什么……不是重点的内容应该简单写一写…… 题目 A、这篇文章的题目新鲜，像春天的竹笋，又嫩又脆……题目很有意思，让人忍不住想看下去……告诉我，你从哪想出这么绝妙的题目……题目加标点符号（省略号、问号、感叹号、破折号），与众不同……我很喜欢你这个有趣的题目…… B、题目老一套，人家就没多大兴趣看你的作文了……这样的题目人人都会起，太一般……内容写的似乎和题目对不上号……动动脑筋，换个啥题目更合适……我看题目不如叫《……》更恰当一些…… 标点 A、这篇文章标点打得规规矩矩，看出来你是个做事顶真的人……标点用得十分准确…… B、内容再精彩，标点马马虎虎乱打，大家也不愿意读你的作文……丢了许多标点，你想让我一口气不停地读下去，憋死我呀……标点可不好吃啊……标点打的太多，读起来一跳一跳的，仿佛瘸子走路……希望你认真打好每个标点……一句话意思说完了应该打句号……省略号占两格，不能打在一个格子里……

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