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when i was ten years old,i broke my arms当我十岁的时候,我伤了我的胳膊.

答案：【When I was at the age of ten.】 翻译；当我10岁的时候. 解析：at the age of.翻译为在.岁的时. 【你的10分满意,我们团队的无限动】

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小题1:began小题2:Gradually小题3:following小题4:guide小题5:by小题6:so小题7:what小题8:photos/pictures小题9:challenge小题10:perfect试题分析：文章介绍作者通过和外国人交谈练习英语，并讲述了一次给外国人做导游的经历，这对他提高英语有很大帮助。小题1:当我十岁的时候，就开始和外国人交谈。考查时态，因为是十岁的事情，用一般过去式：began小题2:一开始，我很害羞，但是逐渐的在他们的帮助下，我越来越自信了。考查副词：逐渐地：Gradually小题3:接下来的一年，我和两个外国人到了扬州。Following是现在分词做定语：“接下来的”，小题4:我成了他们的导游。考查名词“导游”：guide小题5:他们想乘船四处看看。byboat乘船。小题6:卖家不懂英语，所以我尽量把他们说的话翻译成英语。表示因果关系，用so小题7:what引导的是宾语从句，在宾语从句中what做宾语小题8:然后我们去了小动物园，在那里他们拍了很多照片。名词“照片”，注意用复数：photos/pictures小题9:这是一次难忘的挑战。考查名词“挑战”challenge小题10:practicemakesperfect“熟能生巧”

It was the first time that I learnt to riding, when I was 10 years old.

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When I was 10 years old I went to Qin Shihuang"s Terracotta Army

看我10岁了，英语怎么写？

I read this book when I was 10 years old我10岁的时候就看了这本书。

This scarf made of wool. It feels very comfortable and its quality is also very good. It is pink, I most like the color is pink.This is my father in my 10 years old birthday bought me. When it"s time I received, the heart is very happy. It contains thick father I think, filled with a gift of love is a kind of fashion.Fashion and the price has nothing to do

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I began to learn skating at the age of 10.

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I had my first friend when I was ten years old.

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忙碌且充实的9月，不知不觉中已然溜走。值得欣喜的是，在工作间隙，仍然挤时间完成了我在人广头马的第4篇，履行了刚加入头马时，和自己定下的每个月一篇演讲稿的约定。背景介绍 ：头马是国际性非盈利演讲俱乐部（Toastmasters International. TM. ）中文简称，致力于提高会员公共演说能力和领导能力。在公众演讲能力（Public Speaking）部分，TM会提供“会员演讲手册”。其中CC手册中就包含了10个目标（Project）, 每个目标都要通过一个演讲来完成。 P4的目标是“ How To Say It ”,即通过运用修辞手法，赋予语言力量，使得演讲更加生动有趣，打动人心。手册里主要介绍了4种修辞手法，即比喻（Simile）,暗喻(Metaphor)，韵脚(Alliteration)，“3个的运用”（Triads:means a group of three. They might be threewords, three phrases and three sentences.）。 熟悉演讲目标之后，我当时的想法就是，既然P4主要针对的是语言，所以干脆就先抛开演讲演讲目标，像往常一样，第一步先写完一篇演讲稿。完成演讲稿之后，再打磨语言，每种修辞手法都至少使用一次，以完成P4的要求。 我想要讲什么？我应该怎么讲？ 有一次跟资深头马会员Steven闲聊的时候，恰好提到：我小时候，我爸打过我一次，但是他从来不愿意承认。因为对他而言，这是一段痛苦而且后悔的经历，所以不愿意记起，也从内心希望我也能忘记这件事。通过这种假想的“自我欺骗”，减轻他的悔恨感。然后Steven马上就说，这是一个非常好的演讲素材。我当时就楞了几秒，觉得Steven言之有理，所以我就开始回忆这件事，并一层一层解读我爸这个行为深层次的含义。从小到大，我爸就打过我一次，而且是扇耳光，当时我只有10岁。尽管已经是十几年前的事了，但是当时的场景我至今都觉得历历在目。 印象最深的有两点，一是我当时有点恃宠而骄，根本没有想到我爸会对我动手，所以哪怕已经感觉到爸爸正处于爆发的边缘，我依旧任性而为，继续无理取闹，因为我料定我爸不会打我。谁知，现实的耳光，啪地一声，打碎了我天真的幻想。 第二点是，我爸当时应该是冲动了，他自己都没有想到会狠心下手打我。打了我之后，他一句话都没说，一个人躲到阳台，抹眼泪去了。那一幕，真的很让人动容。想想看，一个中年男人，打了自己的女儿，然后自己也哭了。这件事，对于我和我爸两个人而言，就像一根刺扎在心里，会彼此原谅，但不可能遗忘。 在以后的日子里，我爸总是有意无意地假装很骄傲地说起：“女儿，我可从来都没打过你，对吧！”而我每次都会白他一眼，不说话，意思就是：我俩都心知肚明，你记得我也记得，何必自欺欺人呢？ 想着想着，我突然意识到，其实我爸和我一样，从来没有忘记这件事，他之所以一再自欺欺人，不过是因为很后悔当年打我的冲动，他无法原谅对我的伤害，他希望我能忘记这件事，这样才能减轻他的痛苦。 想到这里，心里一紧，鼻子有点酸，就立刻决定用这个故事作为我的P4演讲。此时，距离我的P4演讲日期，仅剩4天，我总是在最后关头，临时更换演讲题目，早已习惯了这样的last minute挑战。 在设计这个演讲的过程中，我一直绞尽脑汁思考，到底应该怎么讲。怎么才能把“我爸打了我，因为他很后悔，所以就一直不承认，假装遗忘”这句话，发展成一个7分钟的演讲呢？ 我当时的想法就是，我希望我的演讲能做到，一开始让听众笑，中间让听众反思，最后抓心听众的心，最好能讲到听众哭。所以，我很快就确定了演讲采用倒叙的方式，第一幕先重现我爸一遍又一遍“逼问”我，不承认打我的场景。目的是，通过吐槽我爸糟糕的记忆，引出演讲内容，并且设计一些幽默的元素，让听众“笑”。同时，因为这次演讲的内容是一个大家都很熟悉的事儿，所以在开头决定采用提问的方式，拉近距离。 开头确定好后，为了让故事讲得更加丰盈，我决定把“一件事”拆开成“两条线”来写。故事的第一部分，重点在我爸。他打了我，他不承认，因为他没办法原谅他自己，这是他的悔恨；故事的第二部分，重点在我。我挨了打，我记得我爸扬起的巴掌，却绝口不提挨打的原因，因为我没办法原谅我自己，这是我的悔恨。 一个故事两条线，最后交在一个点，即升华主旨：生而为人，我们总会犯错，原谅他人，原谅自己，让过往的伤痛随风而逝 (We are human-beings. We make mistakes. Forgive others, forgive ourselves, let the pain gone with the wind) 首先，我觉得这次演讲我的素材很棒，总体而言也是比较满意的。但是，做完这篇演讲回头看时，仍然有很多不足的地方： 1.P4的目标可以再加强一些 。就是虽然我有意识地在套用修辞，但是不够。有些地方，如果语言再打磨一下，效果会更好。比如，结尾我没有采用“Triads”，仅仅是对2个的运用，不够有力度，也不利于听众记住。（这也是我的IE Steven的建议） 2.对比不够突出。 这次有点遗憾的是“两条线”的运用，效果不如预期。下次再做的时候，需要呼应得更明显更清晰一些，才能达到环环相扣的效果。 3.舞台表现得不够到位 。虽然P4对肢体语言和演讲的语音语调，还没有特别要求，但是我明显感觉到我的语音语调以及肢体语言的呈现不足，影响了我期待的演讲效果。所以最后虽然很多听众都表示很触动，但是没有一个被我讲哭。可以理解，我自己都没有完全进入情境，自己都没哭，又怎能听众能像我肚子的蛔虫，完完全全了解我想讲的故事呢？ 最后附上我的P4英文演讲稿，记录我的成长历程。【Speech Title】My Father"s Regret【Project Level】CC 4 【Location】People Square Toastmaster Club【Date】September 19th, 2017 Part 1 (引） Dear Toastmaster and all the guests, when you were a child, have you ever been hit by your parents? As a parent, have you ever hit your children? （开头提问）In my memory, my dad hit me once. But in dad"s memory, he never hit me. （笑点）I can"t remember how many times he said to me with pride,“My darling daughter, I"ve never hit you. Right?” I also can"t remember how many times I replied to him with impatience, “My dear Daddy, you"ve hit me once. I told you 10-thousand times already!” （笑点）That is my dad. He hit me, but he never accepted it. All he did is asking me this question again and again and again. I just wondered maybe I should suggest him to go to a doctor （笑点）, not me, for his poor memory. Part 2 （起）When I was 10 years old, my father hit me in my face. Surprised how come I still remember that kind of thing happened at my 10 years old? You know, I am always the apple in my father"s eyes （明喻）. He spoiled me, protected me, educated me, but never hit me （“三”的运用，但是演讲效果并不好）, until I was 10. I almost forget what I did to irritate him, but I just couldn"t forget his hand smacking my face. At that moment, everything just happened so fast. I was totally shocked. I couldn"t believe that my dad, the man who loves me most in the world, hit me, hit me so hard, hit me so hard in my face! All of a sudden, helpless, hopeless, powerless （“三”的运用，helpless, hopeless, powerless,效果很不错）, feeling abandoned by the whole world, I was filled with grief and burst into crying. It was the first time my dad hit me. It"s also the only time my dad hit me. How come I could forget this miserable scene. Part 3 （承）One night my dad came back home in drunk. You know, drunkard always talk a lot （笑点）. He held my hand and kept apologizing to me. I was so tired of his nonsense and almost lost my temper. And then he talked about the fight happened that day. He suddenly burst into crying, like a baby （暗喻）. All he said to me was “sorry, sorry,sorry…” If times could go back, he would never do it. He blamed himself, abused himself, hated himself （“三”的运用）. At that moment, I was so touched. I totally understood all the things. He remembered every single detail on that day. He pretended to forget it, because he couldn"t forgive himself. He just tried to erase the terrible scene from his memory, also from my memory. But the more you want to forget, the better you remember. He suffered all the time. （这句话与下一段“我”的心理呼应）Part 4 （转）Then I began to recall that day. Did I really forget what I did to irritate my dad? No, I remember every single detail happened that day. I abused my grandfather, the man who loved my dad most in the world. I pretended to forget my part, because I couldn"t forgive myself for the hurt I caused to my grandfather. But the more you want to forget, the better you remember. I suffered it as my dad. （这句话与上一段“爸爸”的心理呼应）Part 5 （合）My dad hit me when I was 10 years old. He raised his hand, smacked in the face. Everything just happened so fast. He couldn"t believe what he did. He was shocked. The tears coursed down his cheeks. He hit me, and he cried. Part 6 （结尾升华）Dear toastmasters and all the guests, when you were a child,have you ever been hit by your parents? As a parent, have you ever hit your children? （呼应开头） Have you regret it even once? Or you just pretend to forget the hurt you caused, as my dad, as me. （呼应主题）But what I want to say is: Nobody can be perfect. We are human-beings.We make mistakes. Forgive others, forgive ourselves. Let the pain gone with wind. (结尾力度欠缺）

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1The boy kicked the door before leaving2I was doing my homework while my deskmate in the bed3You"d better not drink before dinner4I was 10 when I went to Beijing once5She is leaving for France sent me an e-mail6I have never seen such a wonderful match7The results will be announced on the show8Some of us didn"t finish my homework until eleven thirty last night.

我的梦想英语演讲稿（精选10篇） 　　演讲稿在写作上具有一定的格式要求。在快速变化和不断变革的新时代，我们都可能会用到演讲稿，演讲稿的注意事项有许多，你确定会写吗？下面是我帮大家整理的我的梦想英语演讲稿，仅供参考，欢迎大家阅读。 　　我的梦想英语演讲稿 篇1 　　hello everyone! 　　Students, guests,teachers and Honorable Judges 　　Good morning ! 　　my great pleasure to share my dream with you today. my dream is to become a teacher.... 　　As the whole world has its boundaries, limits and freedom coexist in our life. I don"t expect complete freedom, which is impossible. I simply have a dream that supports my life. 　　I dream that one day, I could escape from the deep sea of thick schoolbooks and lead my own life. With my favorite fictions, I lie freely on the green grass, smelling the spring, listening to the wind singing, breathing the fresh and cool air and dissolve my soul in nature at last. Simple and short enjoyment can bring me great satisfaction. 　　I dream that one day the adults could throw their prejudice of comic and cartoon away. They could keep a lovely heart that can share sorrow and happiness with us while watching cartoon or doing personal things. That"s the real communication of heart to heart. 　　I have the belief that my dreams should come true. I am looking forward to some day coming when I am like a proud eagle, which flies to the blue and vast sky. 　　Thank you! 　　我的梦想英语演讲稿 篇2 　　Every one has his own dream.When I was a little kid ,my dream was even to have a candy shop of my own .But now ,when I am 16 years old ,standing here ,my dreams have already changed a lot. 　　I have got quite different experience from other girls.While they were playing toys at home,while they were dreaming to be the princesses in the story .I was running in the hard rain,jumping in the heavy snow,pitching in the strong wind.Nothing could stop me ,because of a wonderful call from my heart -- to be an athlete.Yeah ,of course ,Im an athlete,Im so proud of that all the time . 　　When I was 10 years old ,I became a shot-put athlete.The training was really hard ,I couldnt bear the heavy shot in my hands .But I always believe that "god only help those who help themselves".During those hard days,I find I was growing more quickly than others of the same age.To be an athlete is my most correct choice.But,I quit my team after entering high school because of a silly excuse.I really didnt want to stop my sports career anyway. 　　Today I say to you my friends that even though I must face the difficulties of yesterday ,today and tomorrow .I still have a dream .It is a dream deeply rooted in my soul. 　　I have a dream that one day ,I can run,jump and pitch just like I used to be. 　　I have a dream that one day,I can go back to my dream sports and join the national team. 　　I have a dream that one day ,I can stand on the highest place at the olympic games.With all the cameras pointing at me.I will tell everyone that Im so proud to be a Chinese athlete! 　　This is my hope .This is the faith that I continue my steps with!!! 　　With this faith ,I will live though the strong wind and heavy rain ,never give up ! 　　So let victory ring from my heart,from all of you.When we allow victory to ring .I must be the one! 　　In my imagination,Im a bird ,a magical bird.I carry my dreams all with me by my big wings. I fly though the mountains ,though the forests ,over the sea,to the sun ,the warmest place in the aerospace! 　　Every night ,I have a dream ,I see a girl ---smiling~ 　　我的梦想英语演讲稿 篇3 　　Dream, as the ideal kite, with we yearn for the blue sky, fly. My dream isto become a great scientist, to benefit the people. 　　Remember once, my father and I played badminton go home, found the powerwent out. Don"t blow fan, can only be natural wind. Me and dad with a wet towelto rub the body again. Rub, rub, but is still hot, very afflictive. 　　After this, I see a great scientist. Have a dream, more like reading. Therole of scientists, was destined to want to read more, learn more knowledge.Therefore, I choose to read to finish this great dream. 　　Edison invented the electric light, to make our night full of light. Jamesinvented the electric fan, let us from the heat came to a cool and refreshingworld. Baird invented television, eliminate our depressed...,these inventionsand the one is not the creation of writers have worked. 　　Reading, let"s get new knowledge; Let us closer to success; Let"s haveunexpected harvest. As long as I read the book, my heart is like a pair ofwings, fly in the blue sky. 　　Scientists, in my mind is how great! Because their pay, just for ourcomfort, because they contribute to our happiness, but because of theircreation, to get us more diligence and hard work, I will fight for my goal, comeon! 　　我的梦想英语演讲稿 篇4 　　I dream I can get in my dream the armed police academy, I dream I can be a glorious armed police. 　　Since I was three years old, first on television when he saw the mighty armed police uncles and aunts, I dreamed of being a military police officers. Every day I still haunt my mother-in-law armed police game! 　　I know, it"s not easy to be a armed police, through layers of screening, the best talent can be armed police. To do this, I must be seriously listen to the teacher and do my homework don"t careless, carefully, write down every word the teacher said in my mind. I firmly believe that as long as I"m from now on, learn knowledge well, keep good habits, exercise the body, I can pass the armed police college, can become a glorious soldiers! I firmly believe that as long as adhere to the dream, I can dream to reality, we will be able to succeed! 　　Dear friends, cheer for me! 　　我的梦想英语演讲稿 篇5 　　haheard from people who said: "great because of drea" some dreamare out of reach, but humanto the moon inot also achieved the dream of one thousand years, enough to prove that the "period". 　　mdream ito become a musician, clarinet in the school team, from the beginning are ignorant to blow out the right note, eversong from the unfamiliar to the watch can also like flowing smoothly, pleasing to the ear. songlike i dress, dresup for them, and onlthe birth of new life in mhands, and the notefloating in the air, beautiful melodhugged me, from this, i get a great deal of joy. 　　i waattracted wonderful piano chords, melodiousound, so sign up piano lessons. see someone playing, fingerdancing in black and white keyjump, chord idressed up, foil, song just like the gorgeoupeony, rose, whether happy, sad, lively, passionate; emotions, piano ilike a magic can expresincisiveland vividly, so, i am happto in them, even if the practice coming first to exercise a superpiano art, believe that along athe efforts, will have a dream come true one day. 　　the essence of the musicianplaa musical instrument, writing songs, all of these can bring people happiness, good mood, and comfort the soul, ithe gift of god give the world the most beautiful, ialso mdrea. 　　我的梦想英语演讲稿 篇6 　　Yesterday, we had a discussion. the topic is. What is my dream? Every onehas his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dreamis to become a doctor. 　　My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy I wasvery weak. Once I was terribly iii. I had a high fever. My parents sent me tothe hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. then my parents heardthere was a very good doctor in another town. they took me there. I wassaved. 　　A good doctor can save people" s lives. From then on I decided to become adoctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard.I am sure my dream will come true. 　　我的梦想英语演讲稿 篇7 　　I have many dreams, such as I am rich in the future. Therefore, I can buyall what I want. 　　But my greatest dream is that I want to be an astronaut. Our countrydevelops fast and our space make great progress in the last several decades. Ithas great achievements. All of our country are proud of it. Therefore, I want tobe one of this amazing area. In order to make my dream come true, I must workhard now. So that I can go to a good university to learn more knowledge. 　　I hope my dream can come true one day. 　　我的梦想英语演讲稿 篇8 　　Every dream is heart empty twinkling bright stars on the stage, and each was born out of a young child"s dream is to star in the most pure, most beautiful, just like a tender bamboo shoots and relaxed but person. 　　My dream - clothing designer, I want to be a famous designer in the world, and make China proud, let others envy, even though my dream is very big, but when it comes to do it, start from each step, the first step on the dream. 　　First of all, I will learn to paint, achieve the result that practice makes perfect, try to catch up with the ginger to level, because I lack of imagination, do not out of the beautiful clothes, so I have to look at a fairy tale book. When I tired, want to be lazy, I always think of celebrities is not all through daily practice every night to become famous artist, scientist, costume designer? Just because of this, makes I insist now, because dream makes me become more diligent than ever, more easy to learn. 　　If my dream come true, I will make the most beautiful clothes. I painted clothes, while any celebrity design clothes, soon, I painted a garment is, after all comments, modify, can make a different clothes. I also want to let the people of the whole country all know: making clothes to different, like to write a composition to ingenuity, to create unique clothing. 　　Have a dream is beautiful, a dream to make you hard. Efforts, as long as you set your mind to. 　　我的梦想英语演讲稿 篇9 　　Everyone has a dream.I also have a dream. 　　I want to be a computer programmer.Because I like playing computergames，and then I want to make my own games.Of courseI know it is difficult to bea good computer programmer.SoI have to learn more the knowledges about thecomputer.For exampleI"ll have some computer lessons when I have time.And I willread more computer books everyday.What"sI"ll join the computer club in highschool. 　　In conclusionI will do some things to improve my computer operation.I amsure my dream will come true one day. 　　我的梦想英语演讲稿 篇10 　　I have many dreams.For example，I want to be rich in the future. ThereforeI can buy all what I want. 　　But my greatest dream is that I want to be an football player.And I want tolead the Chinese team won the World Cup Our country develops fast and our sportmake great progress in the last several decades. It has great achievements. Allof our country are proud of it. Therefore I want to be one of this amazingarea. 　　In order to make my dream come true I must study hard now. I hope my dreamcan come true one day. ;

I first saw a panda at the age of ten.

不要误入歧途，你知道这句话的意思，这么简单，没必要在分析，先有语言，后又语法，语法解释不了所有的语言现象。你就是知道他是名词或副词，对你理解句子有帮助吗？这样最耽误学习了，你说汉语从来不考虑语法，语法可以作为初学时的工具，不是枷锁。你听听英语电影，好多不按语法来说。

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I have a hobby.My hobby is swimming.I like swimming . Swimming is good for my health.I like swimming because i like water . Water is cool.I swim in the water is the same as a fish.That"s great！我有一个爱好，我的爱好是游泳，我喜欢游泳，游泳对我的身体很好，我喜欢游泳是因为我喜欢水，水很清凉，我在水里游泳像一条鱼一样，好极了！

got married get + 过去分词,系表结构,表示完成的动作 maryy的用法： 1.marry + somebody 与某人结婚 I married her two years ago. My daughter married Jack yesterday. 2.be married 结婚,表状态,可与一段时间连用 I was married in July. They have been married for 10 years. get marrid 结婚,表动作,不能与一段时间连用,只能与具体时间连用 When did you get married? 以上两者都能加介词 to(注意不能用with)表示与某人结婚 Mary was married to Jim for one months. Why did you get married to her? 3.marry somebody to somebody 把某人许配给某人 Jack"s mother married him to a beautiful girl. 4.为某人主婚 I want Bob to marry us.

I started learning english at age of ...

When I was at the age of ten~希望可以帮到你~

WhenIwastenyearsold,myfamily(moved)tothecity.在我十岁的时候，我家搬到了城市居住。

I could swim when i"m 10.I could swim since 10 years old .我的英国朋友说她最爱打垒球:My English friend said that she likes softball best.

was able to, at the age of

I could swim at the age of 10.I could swim at 10 years ago.

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in ten ...or at my ten years odle.

I have been in the city since i was 10 years oldthis factory has been opened since 2000the film has been on for five minutesmy has gone to beijing since last monthmy brother has been a member of the army fo three yearsthe shop has been closed fortwo months

对went.......was

stood，站在

when he was 10 years of age when was double five when he was a boy of ten

我那时十岁 我需要找一个办法去赚钱

of ageatof five

I like collecting stamps. I started to collect them when I was ten years old. It"s very interesting to collect stamps. My friends are always sending me nice stamps because they know I would be happy to receive them,so now I have many stamps. I have been collecting 300 pieces of stamps by far and I stored them in 8 stamp albums. I have one set of Olympic stamps. They are so wonderful! Do you know anyone else who collects stamps? If yes, please tell me! I would like to start a stamp collectors" club. And what"s your hobby?

1.C 2.C 3.B 4.D 5.D

Your deam is that you can eat yourself.

我人生中一个真实的考试是在全班面前讲话！想象一下我当时会是多么的内敛当我想到那么多只眼睛全在盯着我一个人。但是我却没有任何其他的选择。首先我写好了演讲的稿子，这对于我来说确实很简单，因为我是一个很棒的“作家”-这也是很让我骄傲的一件事。但是更难得还是在口语上去讲给大家；而不是读（这不被允许）；我需要根据我的记忆来演讲，并且是在那么多观众的前面！当我真正站在台上是我感觉到了这个巨大的挑战，我的双腿在颤抖并且整个脑袋都变空白了。我不知道过了多长时间。我的听众一直在耐心的等待着，一点都不对我着急。终于我回归了，带着艰难的演讲完。对我来说就像过了100年，但是最后我发现我的听众都在为我鼓掌。我做到了！从那一次开始，我对于在很多人面前讲话的恐惧再也不见了。同时我也更加的有自信了，我现在成为了一个很棒的“演说家”。回想当时，我突然明白了在成功的道路上最大的困难就是克服一些恐惧，只要你克服了，就有可能实现最终的目标。很费力的人工翻译啊亲！希望你采纳~~

He came to beijing when he was ten years old.当他洗漱的时候，他来北京。

应该是his mother died/was dead 才正确。这是when 引导时间状语从句

How old were you last year? 又是我,没问题的!

当某人xxx岁的时候，比如：when i was 8 years ago, i was in grade two.当我8岁的时候，我上二年级

她十岁的时候